Carmen - The Crimson Witch

Carmen - The Crimson Witch

CHAPTER I

The Plague

“Even the brightest dawn carries the shadow of dusk, for every beginning is already walking toward its end.”
— The Book of Balance

For generations, the Kingdom of Aetheris had known peace. No invading armies crossed its borders, no great famine emptied its fields, and no king had driven the realm into civil war. Merchants traveled safely between prosperous towns, harvests arrived with every changing season, and ordinary people believed tomorrow would always resemble yesterday. Peace had become so familiar that few remembered it was a gift.

Far from the castles of nobles and the crowded streets of the capital lay a quiet farming village nestled between rolling hills and ancient woodland. At its edge stood a modest stone cottage surrounded by apple trees, vegetable gardens, and fertile fields. It belonged to the Blackthorn family, whose kindness was known throughout the valley. Adrian Blackthorn worked the land from sunrise until dusk with patient hands, while his wife, Elena, cared for their home and their ten-year-old daughter, Carmen.

The Blackthorns had lived as farmers for generations, or so Carmen believed. Whenever she asked Adrian where their ancestors had come from, he gave the same answer: somewhere far to the north, long before the family settled in the valley. There was an old family box hidden among their belongings, marked with the Blackthorn crest; a black tree surrounded by strange crimson markings. Adrian kept the box locked and guarded its contents carefully. He knew the old Blackthorn legends, though he rarely spoke of them. He knew the family carried secrets that had survived for generations, including the tradition of passing a sacred pendant from mother to first-born daughter when she reached eleven years of age.

The pendant itself remained in Elena's keeping.

Carmen had recently turned ten, and although she knew nothing about the family tradition, Adrian understood that her eleventh birthday would eventually bring questions he had spent years avoiding.

One crisp autumn morning, Carmen wandered across the meadow until she found Adrian beneath the oldest oak on the farm. The ancient tree towered above the hillside, its broad branches stretching toward the sky. Beside it, Adrian carefully lowered a young sapling into freshly turned earth and pressed the soil around its roots.

Carmen: “Won’t this one be enough?”

Adrian: “That’s what someone probably thought when this old oak was no bigger than the one I’m planting now.”

Carmen: “Do you know who planted it?”

Adrian: “No. Not anymore.”

Adrian reached into his pocket and placed a single acorn into Carmen's hand.

Adrian: “Keep this.”

Carmen: “What for?”

Adrian: “One day, when you’re older, you’ll know where it belongs.”

Carmen slipped the acorn into her pocket.

Life continued much as it always had. Every morning began around the breakfast table before Adrian disappeared into the fields and Carmen vanished into the surrounding forest in search of another adventure. Evenings ended beside the hearth with simple meals, quiet conversation, and the comforting certainty that tomorrow would bring more of the same.

Yet occasionally, strange things happened around Carmen. When she became frightened or upset, a thin veil of black mist sometimes gathered near her feet before disappearing moments later. Tiny crimson specks occasionally shimmered within it, so faint that Carmen usually mistook them for dust catching the light. Once, while wandering alone through the forest, she noticed a narrow ribbon of dark mist curling between the trees behind her. When she turned around, it was gone.

Carmen thought nothing of it.

Adrian did.

He had seen the same description in the old Blackthorn legends.

He said nothing.

As autumn surrendered to winter, unsettling rumors drifted into the valley. Traveling merchants spoke of villages closing their gates, weary refugees arrived carrying frightened children and little more than the clothes on their backs, and chapel bells in neighboring towns rang with growing frequency. Some whispered of a strange sickness spreading across the kingdom, while others dismissed the stories as fear carried by the road.

History would remember it by only one name: The Great Plague.

Winter arrived early, covering the fields in frost before the final harvest was complete. Adrian continued working despite Elena's concern, insisting there was always another fence to mend or another stack of firewood to split before the deeper snows arrived. A few days later, the cough appeared.

At first it seemed harmless, little more than the cold settling in his chest after long hours outdoors. Adrian ignored it, but with each passing morning it lingered a little longer. One evening, while snow drifted quietly beyond the cottage windows, Carmen carved little woodland animals from scraps of oak beside the fire. Adrian worked nearby while Elena prepared supper in the kitchen. For a brief moment, the little cottage felt untouched by the fear spreading across the kingdom.

Then Adrian coughed again.

He turned away from the fire and pressed a clean white cloth against his mouth. When the coughing stopped, he lowered it into the light.

Blood stained the white fabric.

Adrian already knew what it meant.

Upstairs, the old Blackthorn box remained locked away, containing the family heirlooms and records Adrian had sworn to protect. The pendant Elena kept hidden elsewhere would not normally pass to Carmen for another year.

But the plague had already entered their home.

And soon, everything would change.

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CHAPTER II

Farewell

“No soul is ever prepared for loss. It merely believes there will always be one more sunrise.”
— The Book of Balance

Winter tightened its grip on the valley as the Great Plague spread from village to village. Each passing week another cottage closed its shutters, another family gathered in mourning, and another bell echoed from the chapel overlooking the hills. Refugees continued arriving from distant settlements, bringing stories of empty streets and homes abandoned in the night. Fear had become part of everyday life.

At the Blackthorn cottage, Adrian Blackthorn continued working despite the illness growing inside him. His cough became deeper, his breathing more difficult, and the hours he could spend in the fields grew shorter. Elena quietly took over the heavier work, while Carmen did whatever she could to help around the farm.

One morning, Adrian reached for his coat.

Elena: “The fields can wait.”

Adrian: “The weeds won’t.”

Elena: “Neither will spring.”

Adrian: “You sound like your mother.”

Elena took the coat from his hands and hung it back beside the door. For the first time in years, Adrian stayed home.

The following days became quieter. Carmen spent more time beside her father, reading from old storybooks while he rested near the fire. He listened patiently, correcting her whenever she struggled with a difficult word. Sometimes he asked her about the forests, the animals she had seen, or what she planned to do when spring returned. Carmen always answered with plans that assumed he would be there to hear them.

Outside, the valley continued to disappear beneath winter. The chapel bell rang almost every day. The village healer visited homes throughout the valley, carrying herbs and medicines that could ease the symptoms but could not stop the disease.

One afternoon, Carmen returned from the village with a small basket of bread and vegetables. She found Adrian beneath the old oak, wrapped in a heavy blanket.

Carmen: “You shouldn't be outside.”

Adrian: “Neither should you.”

The young sapling stood nearby, its branches bare beneath the winter sky.

Adrian: “It doesn't look like much yet.”

Carmen: “It will.”

Adrian: “That's the idea. You don't plant something because of what it is today. You plant it for what it might become.”

Carmen remembered the acorn in her pocket.

The village healer came to the cottage later that day and examined Adrian beside the fire. He stayed longer than usual, speaking quietly with Elena before leaving. Carmen understood from their silence that something had changed.

That night, she found her father awake beside the hearth.

Carmen: “Are you getting better?”

Adrian: “I'm getting tired.”

Carmen: “You can rest.”

Adrian: “I know. That's what I'm going to do.”

The answer frightened Carmen more than the cough ever had.

The following morning, Adrian could no longer leave his bed. His breathing became shallow, and the coughing came in painful bursts. Elena stayed beside him while Carmen fetched water, prepared food, and kept the fire burning through the night.

By the next evening, Adrian could barely speak.

Carmen sat beside his bed while Elena remained with him.

Adrian: “Carmen.”

Carmen: “I'm here.”

Adrian: “Look after your mother.”

Carmen: “I will.”

Adrian: “And don't forget what I told you about the tree.”

Carmen touched the acorn still resting in her pocket.

Carmen: “I won't.”

Adrian: “Good.”

Those were the last words he spoke to her.

Before dawn, the coughing stopped. The cottage became silent.

Adrian Blackthorn was gone.

Carmen remained beside him until morning, holding the acorn in her closed hand. Outside, snow covered the fields he had spent his entire life tending. Beneath the old oak, the young sapling Adrian had planted remained alive.

Carmen had lost her father.

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CHAPTER III

The Last Gift

“Some inheritances are given with hope. Others are given because there is no time left to wait.”
— The Book of Balance

Snow continued to fall across the valley after Adrian Blackthorn was laid to rest beneath the old oak. The villagers gathered for the funeral before returning quietly to their homes. Carmen remained beside her mother until the final prayer ended, holding the acorn Adrian had given her. The Blackthorn cottage felt different without him. His boots remained beside the door, his tools still hung in the shed, and his chair stood empty beside the hearth. Elena returned to the work of the farm despite her grief, while Carmen took over the tasks she could manage.

Several weeks passed. The plague had begun to weaken across the valley, but its damage remained everywhere. Empty cottages stood behind locked doors, fields were left untended, and families who had survived gathered around fewer tables than before. Then Elena began to cough.

At first it was occasional, and she dismissed it whenever Carmen asked.

Elena: “It's nothing. The winter air.”

Carmen knew better. She had heard those words before.

As the days passed, Elena's condition worsened. One morning, while preparing breakfast, she became too weak to continue working. Carmen took over the household duties without being asked. The village healer came later that day, examined Elena, and listened to her breathing before preparing a small bundle of herbs.

Healer: “Keep her warm. Make sure she drinks. Give her these herbs twice a day.”

Carmen: “Will they make her better?”

The healer hesitated.

Healer: “They may make things easier.”

After he left, Carmen prepared the herbs exactly as instructed. The days became a repetition of care. Elena rested beside the fire while Carmen managed the farm alone. The work was exhausting, but she refused to complain. She had promised Adrian she would look after her mother.

One evening, Elena called Carmen to the table and brought out the old wooden box Carmen had seen years before. She placed it between them and opened the lid. Inside lay a silver pendant suspended from a delicate chain. A dark gemstone rested within its frame, almost black except for faint crimson veins running through its center. Ancient markings surrounded the stone.

Carmen: “I've seen this before.”

Elena: “Your father guarded the box. I guarded what was inside it.”

Elena lifted the pendant.

Elena: “It is passed from mother to first-born daughter when she turns eleven.”

Carmen: “I'm only ten.”

Elena: “I know.”

She placed the chain around Carmen's neck. The gemstone became warm against her skin.

Carmen: “Why are you giving it to me now?”

Elena rested the pendant in Carmen's hands.

Elena: “Because I wanted you to have it while I was still here to give it to you.”

Carmen looked down at the dark stone. She already understood why her mother was giving it to her early. Elena's illness had made the reason impossible to ignore.

Elena: “Your father knew the legends. He guarded the box because he believed the family should remain hidden. I never knew how much of the old stories was true.”

Carmen: “What stories?”

Elena: “That the Blackthorn women carried something within their blood that the rest of the family could never understand.”

Carmen looked down at the pendant.

Carmen: “Something inside us?”

Elena: “Something that has been passed down through the Blackthorn bloodline.”

A faint crimson light moved beneath the stone.

Elena could not explain it.

Elena: “Whatever happens, never lose it.”

Carmen: “I won't.”

Elena closed the empty box and placed it beneath the bed. Outside, the winter wind moved through the branches of the old oak while the young sapling stood beneath the snow, waiting for spring. Inside the cottage, the Blackthorn pendant had passed to Carmen one year earlier than tradition required. Not because the family had changed its ways, but because there was no time left to wait.

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CHAPTER IV

The Witch

“Fear does not always ask what is true. It only asks what it can blame.”
— The Book of Balance

Spring arrived slowly in the valley. The snow withdrew from the fields, revealing dark soil and broken branches beneath it. The plague had passed through the village, leaving fewer families behind and a silence that lingered even after the chapel bells stopped ringing. For Carmen, life had become smaller. She worked the farm with Elena, spent long hours gathering wood and tending the animals, and avoided the village whenever possible. Her mother grew weaker with every passing day, but Carmen refused to leave her side for long.

The pendant remained beneath Carmen's clothing. She had grown accustomed to its weight. Carmen knew why Elena had given it to her a year before tradition required. Occasionally, when Carmen became frightened or angry, the dark stone grew warm against her chest. The Blackthorn family kept to itself, and the villagers mostly left them alone. The plague had taught everyone to be cautious, and Carmen believed the worst of the winter had finally passed.

She was wrong.

One afternoon, Carmen walked toward the village carrying a basket of vegetables. The road was busy with carts returning from neighboring farms. Farmers called to one another, children played near the roadside, and for the first time in months the village sounded almost alive. Carmen stopped near the market square when she heard shouting. A small boy had run into the road after a wooden toy that had fallen from his hands. A wagon was coming toward him. The driver pulled the reins, but the horses did not stop.

The boy remained in the road. The wagon was almost upon him when a woman near the market square screamed.

Boy's Mother: “Help! Someone help my son!”

Carmen reacted immediately. She dropped the basket and ran toward the boy, pulling him away from the road just as the horses charged forward.

The pendant beneath her clothing suddenly burned against her skin.

Black mist erupted around them. It surged upward and spread across the road, forming a dense wall between Carmen, the child, and the approaching wagon. Crimson-red particles drifted through the darkness, countless tiny points of light suspended within the living mist.

The wagon struck the barrier. For an instant, the black matter held. Then something within the mist changed. A section of the darkness compressed, becoming solid and dense. The black-crimson mass formed into a powerful shape before driving forward with brutal force.

The wagon was hurled sideways. Wood splintered as it crashed through the fence, while the horses broke away from the road. The solid mass immediately dissolved back into mist, dispersing across the ground before retreating toward Carmen. The shield collapsed, leaving only a handful of crimson particles suspended in the air before they slowly faded away.

Carmen: “Are you hurt?”

Boy: “N-no.”

Carmen looked toward the wrecked wagon.

Carmen: “What happened?”

She looked down at her hands.

Carmen: “How did I do that?”

The boy's mother rushed toward them and pulled her son into her arms. Around them, the villagers had fallen silent. They had seen the black mist, the crimson particles, and the impossible force that had thrown the wagon through the fence. No one seemed to know what to say.

Then someone stepped back.

Villager: “Witch.”

The word carried across the square.

Another voice followed.

Villager: “She's a witch!”

The crowd began moving away from Carmen. She didn't understand. She had saved the boy. She hadn't attacked anyone. But the villagers no longer saw the girl who had lived among them for ten years. They saw the black mist, the crimson lights, and something they could not explain.

Carmen picked up her basket and ran home.

She found Elena inside the cottage.

Elena: “What happened?”

Carmen: “I don't know.”

Carmen touched the pendant beneath her clothing.

Carmen: “Something happened when I tried to save him. The air… changed.”

Elena: “Did you feel anything?”

Carmen: “I don't know. I was scared, and then it was just there.”

Elena remained silent.

Carmen tried to explain what she remembered, but there was little she could make sense of. She remembered the wagon, the boy, the sudden heat of the pendant, and the darkness that had appeared around them. Beyond that, everything felt blurred together.

Carmen: “What was that?”

Elena: “I don't know.”

Outside, voices began gathering in the distance. Then came the first blow against the cottage door, followed by another.

Villager: “Bring the witch outside!”

A voice shouted from beyond it.

Villager: “We know she's in there!”

More footsteps approached from the road. Metal scraped against wood. Garden tools struck against stone.

Carmen moved closer to her mother.

The villagers had come for her.

And this time, they were not afraid to use force.

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CHAPTER V

The Fire

“When fear is given a voice, it becomes a weapon in the hands of those who know how to use it.”
— The Book of Balance

The first blow against the cottage door shook the walls. Carmen stood beside Elena, listening as more voices gathered outside. Through the small window, she could see villagers carrying lanterns, farming tools, and whatever weapons they had managed to find. The people who had once greeted her family in the market now stood together outside their home, driven by fear of something they could neither understand nor control.

Elena: “Carmen, listen to me. Whatever happens, you stay hidden.”

Another blow struck the door, followed by the splintering sound of wood. Elena pulled Carmen toward the rear of the cottage and opened a narrow storage space beneath the floorboards.

Elena: “Get inside.”

Carmen: “I'm not leaving you.”

Elena: “You're not leaving me. You're staying alive.”

Carmen climbed into the cramped space beneath the floor. Elena lowered the boards over her and covered the opening with an old rug and several sacks. Through a narrow gap, Carmen could still see part of the room. She barely had time to settle into the darkness before the front door burst open and several villagers rushed inside.

Villager: “Where is she?”

Elena: “There is no witch here.”

A man grabbed Elena by the arm.

Villager: “We saw what happened.”

Elena: “She is a child.”

Villager: “She's a danger.”

The villagers searched the cottage, overturning furniture and tearing through the belongings the Blackthorn family had collected over generations. One of them found the old Blackthorn box beneath the bed and threw it aside. The box struck the floor and opened, scattering old papers and family records across the room.

Elena tried to stop him.

Elena: “Leave that alone.”

He ignored her. Another villager grabbed Elena and demanded to know where Carmen was. Elena refused to answer. The man struck her, and Carmen pressed herself against the darkness beneath the floorboards, covering her mouth to keep from making a sound.

The villagers eventually dragged Elena outside. Carmen waited until their voices had moved farther away before crawling from beneath the floor. She reached the window and looked toward the village square. A crowd had gathered around a wooden stake surrounded by firewood. Elena was being dragged toward it. Carmen could barely breathe as she watched them tie her mother to the post. The villagers continued preparing the fire while Elena struggled against the ropes.

Elena: “Please.”

Carmen stepped away from the window. She couldn't stay hidden. Not anymore. She ran from the cottage and pushed through the crowd.

Carmen: “Mother!”

The villagers turned. Elena looked toward her daughter.

Elena: “Carmen, no!”

Carmen pushed forward, but someone grabbed her arm.

The darkness erupted.

Black mist exploded across the ground, spreading between Carmen and her mother. Crimson particles filled the air as the smoke surged upward into a massive wall, shielding Elena from the fire. The flames bent away from the darkness, and the strange black matter expanded through the square with increasing force.

Carmen's eyes suddenly glowed a vivid crimson red.

She reached toward Elena.

Carmen: “Let her go!”

The mist surged outward. Several villagers were thrown from their feet. Wooden structures cracked beneath the force, and the fire scattered across the ground. Carmen could no longer hear the shouting around her. The black mist grew denser, crimson light pulsing through it as she reached Elena and pulled her away from the stake.

Carmen: “Come with me.”

Elena could barely stand.

Elena: “Run.”

Carmen pulled her mother away from the village. Behind them, the black mist continued moving through the square until Carmen finally forced it back toward herself. The darkness collapsed into thin streams of smoke before disappearing completely. The crimson glow faded from Carmen's eyes.

They walked until the village lights were no longer visible. Only then did Elena collapse, and Carmen caught her before she reached the ground.

Carmen: “Mother?”

Elena struggled to speak.

Elena: “I'm sorry.”

Carmen: “Don't.”

Elena: “You have to keep going.”

Carmen held her tightly.

Carmen: “We're going to find somewhere safe.”

Elena looked at the pendant around Carmen's neck.

Elena: “You already have what you need.”

Carmen didn't understand.

Carmen: “What do you mean?”

Elena closed her eyes.

The forest became quiet around them.

Behind them, the villagers remained gathered in the ruined square. They had seen the black mist. They had seen the crimson light. They had seen the girl's eyes.

Fear spread through the crowd.

Villager: “Crimson Witch.”

Another voice repeated it.

Villager: “The Crimson Witch.”

The name followed Carmen into the night.

By morning, Elena was gone.

Carmen buried her mother beneath the trees, far from the village that had taken everything from her. She placed Adrian's acorn beside the grave for a moment before taking it back. The pendant remained around her neck, its dark stone resting against her chest. For the first time in her life, Carmen was completely alone. She was ten years old, and the world believed she was a witch.

Not just a witch.

The Crimson Witch.

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CHAPTER VI

The Orphan

“When everything familiar is taken away, survival becomes the first lesson of freedom.”
— The Book of Balance

The first weeks after Elena's death passed without distinction. Carmen moved through the wilderness without direction, following streams when she could, sleeping beneath trees when the weather allowed it, and avoiding roads whenever she heard voices in the distance. The pendant remained beneath her clothing, its weight a constant reminder of the mother who had placed it around her neck. Adrian's acorn remained in her pocket. Those were the only things she had left from the life she once knew.

At ten years old, Carmen knew nothing about surviving alone. Hunger taught her first. She learned which berries could be eaten, where clean water could be found, and how long she could remain near a fire before its smoke attracted unwanted attention. She slept inside abandoned sheds, beneath fallen trees, and occasionally in the ruins of forgotten buildings. Whenever travelers appeared on the roads, she stayed hidden until they were gone. The villagers had taught her that strangers could become dangerous when fear gave them permission.

Winter eventually gave way to spring. Carmen survived. By the time she was twelve, she could move through the forest without making much noise and recognize the signs of approaching weather. She repaired her own clothing, learned to set simple traps for food, and carried a small knife she had found inside an abandoned hunting cabin. She stopped waiting for someone to rescue her because she understood that no one was coming. The memory of the village never left her. She remembered Elena tied to the stake, the villagers carrying weapons, and the moment the black mist had erupted from her body. She remembered the people thrown across the field and those who never stood again. Carmen did not understand her power, but she understood its danger. She became careful whenever anger or fear began to rise within her.

The pendant remained with her through those years, but Carmen never understood what it truly was. She knew only that it had belonged to her mother and that Elena had considered it important enough to pass down before tradition required. Carmen kept it hidden beneath her clothing and rarely allowed anyone to see it. It was a piece of the life she had lost, and for a long time that was enough.

At thirteen, Carmen began traveling farther from the forest where she had spent her first years alone. She moved between abandoned settlements and distant farms, sometimes earning food by helping with simple work. She rarely gave her real name. When people asked, she used whatever name came to mind. Blackthorn belonged to a life she had lost, and she was not yet ready to carry it openly.

At fifteen, she discovered something that changed the direction of her wandering. While searching the ruins of an old monastery for shelter, Carmen found a damaged book hidden beneath a collapsed section of stone. Much of it had been destroyed by age and moisture, but several pages remained intact. The writing described ancient bloodlines, forgotten magical traditions, and the principles by which power could be controlled rather than simply unleashed. Near the beginning of the surviving pages was a title Carmen recognized from the first page she had managed to read.

-The Book of Balance.

She read until the fading light made the words difficult to see. The book spoke of magic as something that demanded discipline and consequence, warning that power without understanding could destroy the person who wielded it. Carmen did not understand everything she read, but one passage caught her attention. It described an ancient family whose crest was a black tree surrounded by crimson markings.

The Blackthorn crest.

Carmen stared at the symbol for a long time. She had seen it on the family box in the cottage and carried its shape in her memory even after everything else had been taken from her. The book also mentioned a fortress hidden in the northern wilderness, a place associated with the old Blackthorn bloodline.

Ashenfall.

For years, Carmen had believed the strange power inside her was something she needed to fear. Now she wondered whether the answers had been waiting somewhere beyond the mountains. She tore the surviving pages containing the Blackthorn references from the damaged volume and kept them with her. Then she began traveling north.

At seventeen, Carmen crossed an old stone bridge deep within the northern forests. She stopped when something moved between the stones beneath the bridge. A thin veil of black mist curled through the darkness, threaded with faint crimson particles that drifted against the wind before slowly gathering together.

Carmen recognized it immediately.

It was the same strange darkness that had surrounded her when she saved the child years earlier.

But this time, it was not coming from her.

The mist moved toward the surface and briefly formed the shape of the Blackthorn crest before breaking apart. Carmen stepped closer, but the darkness scattered between the stones and vanished before she could touch it. She remained beneath the bridge for several moments, studying the empty space where it had been.

The Book of Balance had told her that old magic could leave traces.

Now she wondered if something had recognized her.

She continued north.

By eighteen, Carmen had spent almost half her life alone. The frightened child who had fled the village had become a young woman capable of surviving without anyone beside her. She had learned patience from hunger, caution from fear, and independence from having no one else to depend upon. She had also learned something else: she no longer wanted merely to survive.

She wanted answers.

The northern mountains appeared beyond the forest as autumn approached. Carmen followed the old road mentioned in the surviving pages of the Book of Balance, climbing steadily toward the ruins hidden beyond the valley. For days, she saw nothing except trees and stone. Then the forest opened, revealing an enormous fortress beyond the valley. Its towers rose above the trees like the remains of a forgotten kingdom.

Carmen stopped at the edge of the forest and looked toward it. She had spent eight years surviving alone, carrying only the memories of her parents, Adrian's acorn, Elena's pendant, and fragments of a book that had given her the first real clue to her family's past.

Now, at eighteen, she had finally reached the place named in its pages.

Ashenfall.

For the first time since she had become an orphan, Carmen felt that she was walking toward something rather than running away from everything she had lost.

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CHAPTER VII

Ashenfall

“Some doors are opened by choice. Others have been waiting for the right blood to return.”
— The Book of Balance

The fortress of Ashenfall stood beyond the northern forest, separated from the rest of Aetheris by mountains, ancient woodland, and years of forgotten history. From a distance, its towers appeared abandoned, their dark stone walls rising above the trees beneath a sky heavy with clouds. No banners flew from the battlements. No guards stood at the gates. Nothing suggested that anyone had lived there for generations.

Carmen followed the broken road toward the fortress. The surviving pages of the Book of Balance had brought her this far, but they had never explained what she would find when she arrived. She passed through the remains of an outer village where collapsed houses had been swallowed by vegetation. The farther she traveled, the older everything became. Stone markers bearing the Blackthorn crest appeared beside the road, half-buried beneath moss and earth.

At the end of the path stood the gates of Ashenfall. They were enormous, constructed from dark iron and covered in ancient markings. Carmen searched for a way to open them, but before she touched the gate, a thin veil of black mist appeared across the ground.

Crimson particles moved through it and gathered around the ancient Blackthorn crest carved into the gate. For several seconds, the markings glowed faintly before the enormous doors slowly opened by themselves.

Carmen entered.

The courtyard beyond was overgrown and silent. Broken statues lined the walls, their faces worn away by centuries of weather. Beyond them stood the main keep, its towering entrance leading into darkness. Carmen crossed the courtyard and entered the castle.

Inside, dust covered the stone floors, while enormous paintings hung along the walls beneath layers of age. Carmen moved through the abandoned halls until she reached a vast chamber containing an ancient Blackthorn crest carved into the floor.

A voice came from the darkness.

Aurethia: “You took your time.”

A woman stepped from the shadows. She appeared young, but her appearance could not explain the age suggested by the fortress around her. Her features showed no trace of the years that had passed through Ashenfall.

Carmen: “Who are you?”

Aurethia: “My name is Aurethia.”

Carmen: “How do you know who I am?”

Aurethia: “Because I have been waiting for a Blackthorn to return.”

Carmen: “What is this place?”

Aurethia: “Your family's home.”

Carmen: “My family were farmers.”

Aurethia: “They were hiding.”

Aurethia walked toward the center of the chamber. The Blackthorn crest beneath her feet was surrounded by ancient symbols, some of which Carmen recognized from the pages she had carried across the mountains.

Aurethia: “Your ancestors built this fortress long before the Blackthorn name became associated with a quiet farming family in the southern valley.”

Carmen: “Why did they leave?”

Aurethia: “They didn't.”

Carmen: “Then where are they?”

Aurethia: “Gone.”

A large mural covered one of the chamber walls. It depicted generations of Blackthorn figures standing beneath a black tree surrounded by crimson light. At the center stood a woman holding the same pendant Carmen wore around her neck.

Aurethia: “The bloodline survived by disappearing. Your father understood that much.”

Carmen: “You knew my father?”

Aurethia: “I knew of him.”

Carmen: “Then you know what happened to him.”

Aurethia: “The plague took him.”

Carmen said nothing.

Aurethia continued.

Aurethia: “Your father knew enough to keep your family hidden. He did not know enough to bring you here.”

Carmen: “I came because I wanted answers.”

Aurethia: “Then you have come to the right place.”

At the far end of the chamber stood a massive door sealed beneath layers of ancient magic.

Carmen: “What is behind that door?”

Aurethia: “The beginning of what your family tried to forget.”

Carmen: “And you? Why are you still here?”

Aurethia: “Because I cannot leave.”

Carmen: “Why?”

Aurethia: “I am bound to Ashenfall.”

Carmen: “Bound by what?”

Aurethia: “Magic older than the kingdom you came from.”

Carmen: “How long have you been here?”

Aurethia: “Long enough to forget what freedom felt like.”

Carmen looked toward the sealed door.

Carmen: “Can you leave if the magic is broken?”

Aurethia: “Perhaps.”

Carmen: “And if it isn't?”

Aurethia: “Then I remain here.”

Aurethia turned toward the great staircase leading deeper into Ashenfall.

Aurethia: “You have spent eight years surviving alone. That ends here.”

Carmen: “What happens now?”

Aurethia: “Now you learn what it means to be a Blackthorn.”

Aurethia walked toward the staircase.

Carmen followed.

Behind them, the doors of Ashenfall closed.

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CHAPTER VIII

The Book of Balance

“Power without balance does not belong to the one who possesses it. It possesses them.”
— The Book of Balance

The great staircase descended beneath Ashenfall, leading Carmen into a section of the fortress untouched by the passage of time. The stone walls were covered with ancient Blackthorn markings, and narrow channels had been carved into the floor to carry faint crimson light through the corridors. Aurethia continued downward until they reached a circular chamber buried deep beneath the keep.

At its center stood a stone table. Upon it rested a large, weathered book bound in dark leather. A black tree had been carved into its cover, surrounded by thin crimson lines that formed the same pattern Carmen had seen throughout Ashenfall.

Aurethia: “This is where we begin.”

Carmen approached the table.

Carmen: “What is it?”

Aurethia: “The Book of Balance.”

Carmen looked at the cover.

Carmen: “I've seen it before.”

Aurethia: “Where?”

Carmen: “In the ruins of an old monastery. I found a damaged copy when I was fifteen.”

Aurethia opened the book.

Aurethia: “Then you have already found the beginning.”

Carmen: “What is it?”

Aurethia: “A record of what the Blackthorn bloodline learned when it first began studying the forces that exist beyond ordinary magic.”

Aurethia turned several pages. The writing was old, but the ink remained remarkably clear.

Aurethia: “It is not a spellbook.”

Carmen: “Then what is it?”

Aurethia: “A warning.”

The chamber remained silent.

Carmen: “A warning about what?”

Aurethia: “Power without balance.”

Several pages contained diagrams of black mist surrounding human figures marked with crimson symbols. Others described the relationship between will, emotion, and magical force. Some recorded Blackthorn descendants who had lost control of the power carried within their blood.

Carmen: “Is this what happened to me?”

Aurethia: “What happened to you was instinct.”

Carmen: “The black mist?”

Aurethia: “Yes. But your family gave that power a name long before you were born.”

Aurethia placed her hand against one of the illustrations.

Aurethia:Noctyra.”

Carmen repeated the word.

Carmen: “Noctyra.”

Aurethia: “It is the ancient magic carried through the Blackthorn bloodline.”

Carmen looked at the pages.

Carmen: “What is it?”

Aurethia: “It is neither smoke nor shadow, though it can appear as both. Noctyra is Black Matter threaded with Crimson Energy Particles. The Black Matter forms its body, while the Crimson Energy gives it movement, force, and purpose. It is bound to the life of its caster. As long as the bearer lives, Noctyra remains connected to them. It responds to their will, their strength, and their state of mind. In its natural state, it moves like black mist, but with enough will, the Black Matter can become solid.”

Carmen remembered the wagon being hurled through the fence.

Carmen: “That's what saved the boy.”

Aurethia: “Yes.”

Carmen: “And the village?”

Aurethia: “The same power. Without control.”

Carmen remained silent.

Aurethia continued through the pages.

Aurethia: “Noctyra responds to the bearer. Fear can bring it forth. Anger can increase its force. Pain can distort its form. But emotion alone cannot control it.”

Carmen: “Then what can?”

Aurethia: “Will.”

Carmen looked toward the pendant beneath her clothing.

Carmen: “My mother said it was a family tradition.”

Aurethia: “It was. But traditions often survive long after people forget why they began.”

Carmen: “What does it do?”

Aurethia: “The pendant does not give you Noctyra. It helps you contain it.”

Carmen touched the pendant.

Carmen: “Then why didn't my mother tell me?”

Aurethia: “Because she did not know enough to teach you.”

Carmen: “And my father?”

Aurethia: “He knew the legends. That does not mean he understood the power.”

Aurethia closed the book.

Aurethia: “Your parents protected you the only way they knew how. They hid your bloodline and hoped you would never need to understand it.”

Carmen: “But I do need to understand it.”

Aurethia: “Yes.”

Aurethia opened the Book of Balance to another section. Three ancient words had been written beneath the Blackthorn crest.

Control. Understanding. Balance.

Aurethia: “These are the principles that kept the Blackthorn bloodline from destroying itself.”

Carmen: “Can you teach me?”

Aurethia: “I can.”

Carmen: “Then start.”

Aurethia: “Tomorrow.”

Carmen: “Why not now?”

Aurethia: “Because the first lesson is knowing when you are not ready.”

Aurethia closed the book and returned it to the stone table.

Carmen remained in the chamber for a moment, surrounded by centuries of Blackthorn history. The power that had once appeared to her as nothing more than frightening black mist finally had a name.

Noctyra.

It was not a curse.

It was not a gift.

It was something that had existed within her blood long before she understood it.

And now, for the first time, Carmen was going to learn how to control it.

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CHAPTER IX

The First Lesson

“Power does not become yours because you can summon it. It becomes yours when you can choose whether to.”
— The Book of Balance

Morning came quietly to Ashenfall. Carmen woke in a small chamber overlooking the eastern courtyard, having spent her first night inside the fortress. The room contained little more than a bed, a wooden table, and a narrow window overlooking the ruined gardens. She dressed, secured the pendant beneath her clothing, and followed the corridor toward the lower chambers where Aurethia had told her to meet her.

The training chamber lay beneath the fortress, beyond the room where the Book of Balance was kept. Its floor was circular and marked with ancient Blackthorn symbols. Along the walls stood stone pillars covered in inscriptions, each one describing different principles of control. There were no weapons, no targets, and no instruments of combat.

Aurethia stood at the center.

Aurethia: “Today you will learn what Noctyra responds to.”

Carmen: “My emotions?”

Aurethia: “Partly.”

Carmen: “Then what else?”

Aurethia: “Will.”

Aurethia walked toward one of the stone pillars.

Aurethia: “Fear can summon Noctyra. Anger can strengthen it. Pain can distort it. But none of those things control it.”

Carmen: “Then what does?”

Aurethia: “You.”

Carmen stood within the circle.

Aurethia: “Summon it.”

Carmen waited.

Nothing happened.

Carmen: “I don't know how.”

Aurethia: “You already know.”

Carmen: “I don't.”

Aurethia: “You did it when the wagon came toward the boy.”

Carmen remembered the road, the child, and the darkness that had appeared without warning.

Carmen: “I was afraid.”

Aurethia: “Exactly.”

Carmen closed her eyes and tried to remember that moment. She remembered the wagon approaching, the mother's scream, and the certainty that the child was going to die if she did nothing.

Nothing happened.

She opened her eyes.

Carmen: “It isn't working.”

Aurethia: “You are trying to force it.”

Carmen: “How else am I supposed to summon it?”

Aurethia: “You don't summon Noctyra by commanding it. You create the conditions for it to answer.”

Carmen looked at the markings beneath her feet.

Carmen: “That makes no sense.”

Aurethia: “It will.”

Aurethia instructed Carmen to stand still and breathe slowly. She told her to empty her thoughts rather than search for the fear that had triggered her first manifestation. Carmen followed the instructions, though nothing appeared at first.

Minutes passed.

Then a thin strand of black mist emerged beside her foot.

Carmen opened her eyes.

The mist curled across the stone floor. Tiny crimson particles moved within it, barely visible in the dim chamber.

Carmen: “I did it.”

Aurethia: “Don't move.”

Carmen held still.

The mist remained low to the ground, moving slowly around her feet.

Aurethia: “Now release it.”

Carmen: “How?”

Aurethia: “Stop holding it.”

Carmen relaxed her breathing.

The mist dispersed.

She looked at the empty floor.

Carmen: “That's it?”

Aurethia: “That is the beginning.”

Aurethia walked to the center of the chamber.

Aurethia: “You have spent eight years treating Noctyra as something dangerous that happens to you. From now on, you will learn to treat it as something that responds to you.”

Carmen looked toward the dark mist that had already disappeared.

Carmen: “And if I lose control?”

Aurethia: “Then you stop.”

Carmen: “What if I can't?”

Aurethia: “Then I will stop you.”

Aurethia returned to the edge of the training circle.

Aurethia: “Again.”

Carmen closed her eyes.

This time, she did not think about the wagon. She did not think about the village. She did not think about the fire. She simply breathed.

A thin layer of black mist gathered around her feet.

Crimson particles appeared within it.

Carmen remained still.

For the first time, Noctyra did not feel like something that had happened to her.

It felt like something listening.

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CHAPTER X

The Crimson Witch

“Balance is not the absence of darkness. It is the knowledge that darkness exists, and the discipline to decide what it becomes.”
— The Book of Balance

The training continued through the changing seasons of Ashenfall. Under Aurethia's instruction, Carmen learned that Noctyra was not controlled through force. It responded to intention, discipline, and will. The black mist could spread across the ground like smoke, rise into a defensive barrier, or gather into dense forms capable of striking with tremendous force. The crimson energy within it remained constant, moving through the Black Matter like a current flowing through something alive.

At first, Carmen could barely produce enough Noctyra to cover her hands. When she became impatient, the mist scattered. When she tried to force it into a solid shape, it collapsed. Aurethia never increased the difficulty until Carmen could repeat the same technique without losing control. The lessons were slow and sometimes frustrating, but they gradually gave Carmen something she had never possessed before: understanding. The Book of Balance became part of her training, and Aurethia had Carmen study its principles before attempting more advanced techniques. The book described ancient Blackthorn wielders who had allowed their emotions to dictate the form of their power. Some had turned Noctyra into weapons they could no longer control, while others had exhausted themselves by forcing the Black Matter beyond what their bodies could sustain.

Carmen learned the difference between summoning Noctyra and commanding it. She learned to form a shield without allowing the mist to expand beyond her intention, to compress small amounts of Black Matter until it became solid, and to release it before the strain became dangerous. Most importantly, she learned to dismiss it. Years passed, and by the time Carmen reached her early twenties, she could move Noctyra with precision. She could send black mist across a room without disturbing anything around it, create solid forms from compressed Black Matter, and surround herself with a defensive veil capable of absorbing powerful attacks. The crimson particles remained visible throughout every manifestation, giving her magic its unmistakable appearance.

But Aurethia never allowed her to forget what happened in the village.

Aurethia: “Your greatest strength is not how much Noctyra you can produce.”

Carmen: “Then what is it?”

Aurethia: “Knowing when enough is enough.”

Carmen continued training. Eventually, she learned that the title given to her by the villagers had spread far beyond the valley. Travelers spoke of a mysterious woman who appeared without warning, surrounded by black mist and crimson light. Some called her a monster. Others called her a sorceress. Most had never seen her at all. But the name remained: The Crimson Witch.

Carmen never chose it. She had survived long enough to understand that names could become legends, and legends could become weapons. Yet the title eventually became something different. It was no longer simply the name frightened villagers had given the ten-year-old girl who had saved her mother. It became the name whispered by those who had witnessed Carmen's power firsthand and survived to tell the story.

Over the years, Carmen transformed Ashenfall from a forgotten fortress into the heart of the Blackthorn legacy. The ruined halls were restored, the ancient chambers reopened, and the Blackthorn crest once again appeared above the gates. But Carmen believed the fortress needed more than restoration. It needed its true name.

Ashenfall was no longer simply a place where the Blackthorn bloodline had hidden.

It was home.

The ancient fortress was renamed Castle Blackthorn, and Carmen became its ruler. The title was not given to her through conquest or inherited through a royal bloodline. It came from the restoration of the Blackthorn house and the recognition of Carmen as the living bearer of its ancient power. She became known as the Empress of Castle Blackthorn.

The title spread alongside her other name. To some, she was a feared sorceress. To others, she was the last heir of an ancient bloodline. Within Castle Blackthorn, she was something else entirely: the woman who had returned the Blackthorn name to the world.

One evening, Carmen stood upon the highest balcony of the castle overlooking the northern mountains. Black clouds gathered beyond the horizon, illuminated occasionally by distant flashes of crimson light. Aurethia approached with a sealed letter and placed it before her.

Aurethia: “This arrived today.”

Carmen took it. The seal bore a symbol she had never seen before.

Carmen: “Who sent it?”

Aurethia: “No name.”

Carmen broke the seal and unfolded the letter. Only a few lines had been written: The Blackthorn has awakened. The Crimson Witch has returned. The one who bound Aurethia still remembers her. And they know where Castle Blackthorn stands.

Carmen read the final line again. The letter contained one final mark, a symbol resembling a black circle surrounded by crimson fractures. Carmen had seen it before; not in the Book of Balance, not in the Blackthorn records, but somewhere in the oldest memories of her childhood. She remembered seeing the same symbol carved into the wooden box her father had kept locked away. Carmen folded the letter and placed it on the table.

Carmen: “Aurethia.”

Aurethia: “Yes.”

Carmen: “How much of the Blackthorn history have you kept from me?”

Aurethia did not answer immediately. Far beyond the castle walls, something moved through the mountains. A thin veil of black mist appeared between the distant trees, and crimson particles began gathering within it. Carmen watched as the darkness formed and disappeared beyond the mountains.

Aurethia: “Enough to keep you alive.”

Carmen looked toward the northern mountains. Whatever had been waiting for the Blackthorn bloodline had finally found her. This time, she would not run. The gates of Castle Blackthorn stood beneath the night sky, bearing the crest of the woman the world had once called a witch. She was the Crimson Witch, the Empress of Castle Blackthorn, and the last known bearer of Noctyra. Yet beyond the mountains, another presence had awakened; one that knew the Blackthorn name, knew Aurethia, and had been waiting for Carmen long before she ever reached Ashenfall.

The story had only just begun.

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